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I got back from Toronto recently and have spent the last couple days decompressing. Starting a trip off with 24 hrs of no sleep followed by 10 days where one gets less than five hrs of sleep a day takes a toll on you – not to mention the effect it has on your sleeping patterns.

I’ve finally caught up with my sleep and getting ready for another trip which would be this Monday – this time to Vancouver!

Today I managed to put up some “in-takes” of browntourage. Watch and comment!

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Recently on Facebook I posted up a pic to get people’s feedback and responses on ways to improve the Browntourage series. In my opinion a great dialog took place and found four ways to improve the series in the next upcoming episodes.

Before I lay out the points, the reason I’ve started this series is:

I travel a lot. At least once a month I’m flying out to somewhere. There are amazing people in each of these places and I learn a lot of things from them. I also see many beautiful things – stuff that you wouldn’t see unless you left your home.

This series is my way of sharing what I’ve seen and the people I’ve met.

The improvement points are:

• Set naming structure in accordance with the premise of the series. Change “Episode” to “Trip”

• Keep up the coherency of the episodes/trips. Communicate where I’m headed, who I’m with, and why I’m with that person.

• Don’t just include people, but include lot of people who add substance and content to the episode.

• Where visuals failed to communicate what’s going on, use a narrative to structure a story/plot to enhance it and have it be more engaging.

You’re more than welcome to add to these points inshaAlah.